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Low resolution language, high resolution brains.
High resolution bandits, low resolution trains.

New years' resolution coffee, no-resolution stains.
Low dissolution sugarbottom, very high voltage mains.
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:iconmichelesato:
~michelesato Nov 17, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
this is absolutely lovely :)
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:iconsilverhare:
A mighty fine pulsing rhythm, should we do a be-bop on it?
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:iconblanko2:
listening to "running out of days" as i read this and i wonder if its a coincidence.
not likely.
and ur supposed to laugh cuz thats what u do when something is sad.
soz lost my train of thought there. hahaha
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~oddlyaromatic Jul 27, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Bam. TWOFER.
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:icona-random-quigle:
This is wonderful... quite unlike what you usually write in many ways. There's so much more to it than meets the eye- a whole host of stories... and ways it can be read... I keep finding more... each time I read it. I can't decide whether I should be smiling, laughing or crying.

There's a typo in the 3rd line btw... a trend it seems. :D
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:iconskyrail:
Simple, flowing, short and to the point. I like it, I don't often read poetry all the same :hmm:
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