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So long

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The night is over
      but we haven't fallen in love

The sun is sprinkling
a little
     more ~~magic than usual over the
dripplygrassGoodMorning!
     bread, orange juice, kettle's ready

  and you're going away
    to wherever it is you go

bye!     bye.

kthunk.

I'll just be standing in the hall, then
I was gonna say that this is a more manic version of this: [link] - but there's an important word/concept/something that differentiates them.

And this one's more colourful. :)

Anyway, this didn't happen. Not in the sense that you can read something in the news and discern that a particular course of event has taken place somewhere anyway. Well, maybe it happened to ~somebody~ last night. In fact it probably did.

I have a rare, sophisticaed form of angst. I Imagine that's what everybody with angst thinks, though.
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a-random-quigle's avatar
Even better when I revisit.