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Scar

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Scar

Her house no longer hectic; her parents quite prepared,
She only knew of Christmas that she'd be bestowed with glee.
She was unscarred and innocent; they gazed at her and smiled,
As all they knew, was what they saw; her sight 'fixed 'pon the tree.

The streets had been so crowded; where was it all this day?
Though scars and decorations stayed, all life had gone away.


She slept 'till it was early, but sacrificed her warmth,
She rose from bed to venture down towards her endless gifts.
Her parents forced, but smiling; now standing, watching close.
Watching as she laughs and opens, sifting after sift.

Emerging from his home, his simple shelter by the street,
He rubbed the sun that stole his eyes, but heard the passing feet.


"Why don't you play with this one, dear?"; ambrosia, untouched.
But unaware, she went on holding tightly, a small bear.
No decorations, ribbons, nor jewels upon his face.
Just a smile that loved her, and held her in its care.

This must have been their "Christmas"; something he can't understand,
He never understood the fuss nor crowds that roamed his land.


Her father had sighed just before they'd left the house for mass.
She'd brought with her, her teddy and some footprints for the snow.
Somehow she loved the cheapest, simplest present of the tree,
Somehow she saw a little boy, that no-one seemed to know.

And all were walking past him; they all seemed glad, together,
Yet he'd noticed someone walk to him, despite the tearful weather.


Her parents hadn't noticed, as she strayed away from them.
He took a single step away, but something made him stay.
She looked at him, and saw a world of sorrow in his eyes.
He couldn't say a single word, nor could he walk away.

She held her present in her arms; hugged it, just once more.
She put it down, and smiled at him, but never passed his door.

He saw her leave, and knew he'd never see her leave again.
A smile had come to join his tear; it felt so strange to him.
He took the bear and ventured back to his home by the street,
This must have been her "Christmas";
Just one,
In those passing feet.


Pach, 53rd day of Winter, MMI
Was in funky funky Kilkenny yesterday, found me a place called 'Butter Slip', in freakin' credible place.. the one bollage day I din' bring m'camera.. wanted to write a poem about it, but couldn't.. everything I wanted to say could only be said through the picture.. so'm gonna draw it some time over the next soonish.. in the mean time, summick completely different :D (Big Grin)

This is probly as festive as I'm gonna get :j

Not a huge amount of symbolism in this, mostly the message is as it is on the frontal level, still tho'.. see whatya make of it..
Wanted to record it but 'nfortunately 'm bein' rushed.. gonna be back late Christmas Evish, will record and probly explain this then, if anybody's interested enough to come back for it :) (Smile)

And while I'm not spamming:
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Two of five poems m'lady submited the other day.. she's new and has little access so she's hardly gettin' any views.. kinda sucky.. told 'er I'd "ask" you ppl :P (Razz) It'd make a great Christmas pressie for 'er.. please? *blink*

And this is why I don't sell stuff..

Anyway.. poemage..
Lemme know whatyaz make of it, somebody's bound to geddit.. 'sactually pretty simple.. anyhoo..

Pach
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