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Earthly Goodness

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I watch-

As you spend your days
Casting your life onto paper,

Only to have it
All
Blown away in the wind.
There's probably a lot more thought behind this one than is evident (been making a point of doing that with m'poetry of late- in the past I'd accuse such a thing of hindering me- not so- perhaps 'tis with m'newfound positive karma and all. :j), specifically, there's significance in the isolated first line.. in that, if it were given a higher dose of importance (or placed at the end, as was my original plan), it would change the poem quite a bit..

It's about what is and isn't important, it's about deities and what makes them, and I remember originally thinking that it was about karma, somewhere in there- but I don't see that now.

I feel like have a rather intimate connection with all my writings and artwork in general from the past few months- 'tis a good thing. :) It's also inspired me to become the closest I've been to purging the majority of the earlier half of my gallery. We'll see.

I do believe things are looking very positive- I believe the glimmer I always saw somewhere in the future that kept me going may have arrived already, rather out of the bluely.. which is a major, major thing from my freakyspiritual point of view. I'll journalise that shortly. :)

G'night! :)
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rathless's avatar
It speaks volumes. I like it.